A Geography of Endurance Day 11
These Hills Hold
What I couldn’t say,
the wind carried anyway.
It rained in my head for months—
but now these flowers
lift their faces
toward whatever light there is.
I remember Papaw Bill
falling from the branch while fishing—
his boot and pride
floating downstream.
I cast my line over a limb,
and a fish took
the moment it touched water.
These hills
held so much
of my language.
The iron—sweet smell of wet clay
rose from the creek—
faint enough
to open me outward.
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This is the final poem in A Geography of Endurance Part 1.
Noooooooo!
Stunning:”The iron—sweet smell of wet clay
rose from the creek—/faint enough/to open me outward.
Thank you, Pam!
The mention of the clay reminds me of how literally the hills can hold impressions and memories, given just how much of archaeology involves finding things like handprints or words written in baked clay. You can walk along a riverbank and literally find the footsteps of those who came before, and trinkets they left behind.
Very true. All the traces we leave in the places that made us who we are, on the earth that molded us. Impressions².
I couldn’t agree more with both of you. Thank you both for always reading me so diligently!
A Geography of Endurance TOC
Fault Lines
Boundary Work
The Things I Won’t Say
A Stone-Heavy No
Combustion
Black Iron Lung
Hollowed
Mountaintop Removal
Thaw
The Basin
Drowning in Sweetness
The Basin of the Hollow
Entanglements
Appalachian Dodder
Porous and Enamored
These Hills Hold
These Hills Hold
Wow! Very creative, Jeremy. I didn’t put and two together till now.
But for this one:
That second stanza sings!
And Papaw Bill’s boot and pride was well done.
This is going to make a great series.
Thank you, Eric!
Get them published- a chapbook!
Yes!!!
What a beautiful series you crafted, Jeremy. After reading them all, it makes me want a part 2 of the series!!
This part is my favorite:
“I remember Papaw Bill
falling from the branch while fishing—
his boot and pride
floating downstream.”
What an image!
Such great work. Truly. Thanks for sharing these with us.
Jeremy, I’m like a broken record, playing the same tune over and over: you have bloomed this year into a fantastic poet. This poem is exquisite and the perfect ending for your series. Bravo.
Thank you, Kevin. I am glad you approve!
Very nicely done . I really like “It rained in my head for months—/but now these flowers/lift their faces…”
What the mountains tell us if we listen. Your writing is lyrical and sincere; it touches all the senses. The imagery you capture so vividly it stays with the reader.
A breathtaking conclusion to this series. Perfect last lines with “These hills / held so much / of my language.” –The essence of your settings- a true geography of endurance, down to the “iron” scent that opens you outward. –Your hope. Beautifully done! Great TOC, too.
Jeremy = I echo all the sentiments above! Yes on a book! This poem seems to bring it all full circle.
“It rained in my head for months—” – so nice!!!
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