A Geography of Endurance Day 6
Thaw
I opened the garage door
and found the floor washed in blood.
A heavy, sickly-sweet rot clung
like wet wool to my throat.
The freezer door — left open by my own hand —
had let the whole summer thaw:
fence-mending, cattle-chasing, baling hay
now pooled in a red accusation across the concrete.
That blood was the liquid history
of thirteen head on our small farm.
My father blasted powder crews by day,
then came home
to low impatient moos and shirts dark with work.
Saturday mornings at the stockyard.
I drifted toward merchant tables—coins, cards—
while he studied the ring.
The auctioneer’s fast Appalachian tongue
cutting through manure and wet hay.
They dragged the freezer outside,
hosed it down, mopped the floor.
The worst shame I ever felt
was my parents on their knees
in the blood I let loose.
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Great!!!
Ouch.
I’m glad you felt the pain, Coleman.
Vivid memory! Rot clung like wet wool to my throat!
I’m never forgetting that moment for sure! I’m glad you enjoyed Linda.
Wow.
Thank you for reading, Jerielle. I’m looking forward to getting more familiar with your poetry during this LEXPOMO.
Oh, yikes… hearkening back through the entire history of that cattle really does help the reader see and understand just how costly a mistake that was. I agree that the “clung like wet wool” line was a very good one!
This is great feedback to hear, thank you L. Coyne. I’m glad you enjoyed.
The way you set the scene and move us gently through each moment– close by and further away– is incredible! The sadness lingers after reading.
Grateful you took the time to read it so thoughtfully. I always look forward to hearing your insights.
Such a good poem! I really felt it, which is the most important thing. I like what H.A. said. You walk us through the poem gently and with poignant detail to describe a painful memory.
Thank you, Linda! This series is pulled straight from lived experience, so it means a lot to hear that the emotional weight came through.
The closing image is one I will never forget. beautifully developed
Me neither, Gaby!
When I read that you “had let the whole summer thaw,” I knew what was coming. Good poem with a hard lesson.
I always press and hold on a freezer when closing it now. Thanks again for stopping by John!
Another triumph, Jeremy! What the hell are you putting in your Wheaties? I’ll have what you’re having.
“Liquid history”—oof! So good.
That last stanza put me down like one of those cows.
Your last sentence, just put me down haha
Right with you here “A heavy, sickly-sweet rot clung
like wet wool to my throat.”
Woah…” blood was the liquid history”
Love: “The auctioneer’s fast Appalachian tongue
cutting through manure and wet hay.”
And in keeping with Kevin’s comment…”I’ll have what you’re having!”
Oh my gosh. I can’t imagine
this. Having raised beef cattle
myself, this hit me in the gut.
The picture of your parents
on the floor is devastating.
I will never forget it Jim.
You’ve got a great talent for story telling through your poetry, Jeremy!
Thank you S.L. Cavin! I’m giving it my best!
My goodness, Jeremy! Having experienced something similar, I re-experienced the heartbreak of losing that which was hard earned. To watch it melting away. The last two lines sing in their sadness and shame.
‘the heartbreak of losing that which was hard earned.’
Such a good summary. Thank you Sylvia!
Your poems are taking me to a world I know little of, and what a journey!
I’m happy you are enjoying the experience Lee. It’s interesting to hear the perspective of someone without the same perspective.
This brought me to tears.
Your poetic voice is so strong–
all of it gripping, in a “can’t look away” way. The images and story are seamlessly woven–
The freezer door — left open by my own hand —
had let the whole summer thaw:
fence-mending, cattle-chasing, baling hay
now pooled in a red accusation across the concrete.
Oh wow, I am so honored Elaine! Thank you, I have been putting in the time to get better.
Such visceral imagery! It’s the heavy emotional weight you show that most brought it to life for me. I felt as though I was there.
Thank you Michele, you always let me know what I do best!
Great job capturing a memory. The “floor washed in blood” is definitely an attention-grabber.
I’m very happy to hear that. I think I did a better job this year starting with a bang instead of building up the pressure towards the end.
“now pooled in a red accusation across the concrete” was an excellent line. I felt the weight of anxiety and fear for that young man. Wow. I think I’d remember that too. Great job!
So much anxiety and fear!
Clear as a bell. Visceral. The line “tongue/cutting through manure and wet hay” followed by that end.
I’m excited to continue getting the clearly understood comment. I am always in fear of being misunderstood.