A Silencing
Isolated in all directions
from distraction.
Only ink can speak
softly of what life
a reasonable person writes
without revealing anything.
Breath comes in a loud gasp
grasping for balance.
Locust thorn pierces my palm
and the mind scream is eerily calm
quiet as the trees.
Up here where the wind spins
gusts move simple shrines
of tipped twigs
in the duff, then offer replacements.
A handful of thrown leaves
is sculpture, this place is alive.
—
—
Only ink speaks softly
of what life a reasonable person
could write
without revealing everything.
The small pines whisper,
“We came here after the fire.
Our mother died.”
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this is amazing!
I’m not sure I’m following this perfectly but I like the two-part structure.
So many wonderful lines, this might be my favorite:
“A handful of thrown leaves
is sculpture, this place is alive.”
only ink speaks softly, I like the pines and their mother
I suggest abandoning reason and revealing everything
Lol…..perhaps it’s not so much reason as it is more like physics …..lolol ” ” “Eddington limit: The maximum luminosity a body (such as a star) can achieve when there is balance between the force of radiation acting outward and the gravitational force acting inward.” ….lolololol
love the sound of
Up here where the wind spins
gusts move simple shrines
of tipped twigs
in the duff,
how much to reveal
and whose real is revealed
a balance like Eddington’s limit
the physical & the physics
(great poem)
Jim, Eddington!
We were just talking about how after a while in lexpomo ” the pod begins to play in the same waves”
Right???
absolutely beautiful, and oh my, the ending…..
Yeah 🙂
A lot of love.
Funny side note: mother is a non-gender specific term for them.
I appreciate the thoughtful and almost meditative tone of this piece
“Only ink speaks softly”
That line is so perfect
makes me think of where ink is today
or what today is ink
Ink is very well the medium for most of us
but is never used outside our private little notebooks
<3
I think your poems teach me that being one with nature is an endless source…maybe for everything…and if fire comes, the new pines will still speak to you….a fine thing
I appreciate that i get to experience nature through your soft speaking ink….
I live in the city and when I read your poems, I just want to get in the car and drive out of town until there are no more signs telling me where to look!!
Beautiful. Love all the internal rhyme.
So touching!
This is lovely!
Oh, the beauty and then the ending!
This one sings softly to me. Gorgeous.
Wow! What an ending.