A Walk Around the Neighborhood
Garbage truck Tuesday
while we’re still in jammies,
sipping drip coffee,
the day a ghost of possibilities.
You say lets make a plan,
but our diagram fleshes only as far
as taking the dogs for a walk
around the common loop,
hellos to the same neighbors
as yesterday and tomorrow,
no one anxious to go through
the hassles of packing and moving,
learning the customs of a new neighborhood,
which neighbors freak at having
dogs drop their loads in their yards
even though we always pick up,
which ones go overboard
on holiday decorations,
which keep the bedroom curtains open
and the shades up at night,
having to learn who drinks too much
and curses kids for simply riding their bikes
on the sidewalk, and who once beat his wife
and was hauled off in cuffs,
a walk that would end with the dogs’
tongues hanging and us bickering
about the proper name of the color
of the neighbor’s salmon red door
— it’s not brick, it’s not —
now distraught, our plans
fade like the poster for a missing cat
drawn in ink and tacked
to a splintery telephone pole,
several months exposed
to wind and weather,
ignored by all who pass it.
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Bill, Im into a neat book about meter this year and so glad for it.
I feel the feet of this….stepping.
The second half of each quatrain counterpops rhythmically and thematically like little mini-turns.
Classic masterpiece of a Brymeration.
Love it.
Bill, this piece is incredible. I agree with Coleman, this one moves beautifully. The way the poem unfolds from such a light beginning to a heavy ending is amazing. Great work.
Like H.A., I like it that it starts order but ends ends ups as a message of neglect.
You have such a distinct style and perspective!
I really enjoy the details of the “seemingly” mundane in this piece.
Great poetic commentary
on the Hood.
Nice journey poem. The Odyssey in the suburbs, which I guess makes you Ulysses 😇