American Sentence CII
Woman tucked bank notes promised to Unwed Mothers Home in her pocket.
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Woman tucked bank notes promised to Unwed Mothers Home in her pocket.
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Ah, another twist! Play us like a piano, Pam!
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I feel a ratcheting the tension, especially with the last several days, in a way that makes me greedy for tomorrow’s!
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Yes, a new twist!
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Going WAY out on a limb here. Might this sentence be semi-autobiographical?
Lol, Lee, come back off the limb, not semi autobigraphical in the truest definition—these lines come from my knowledge and experience of seeing and knowing women, in impossible situatuions, handled with shame and hardship and who were coerced rather than helped to think and make their own decisions best for them and their babies with proper support and respect.
Mixed in is my sense of how I would feel if I were Woman..
Linda, can’t wait for what you bring tomorrow.
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The plot thickens. Love it.
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I’m wondering if she’ll give it to the cowboy???
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Very interesting to imagine the moment–is this when she is leaving the house, intending to take the bank notes to their promised place? Is she one of the intended recipients taking her share? Is she stealing the money, or was it always hers and she is now deciding to give it to someone other than who she promised? Many different possibilities hidden here!
Love your questions! ☺️
I love your brave woman!
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OH I did not see that coming!
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You leave us with questions. Cannot wait to read tomorrow’s tease. Very vivid action sentence.
Thanks, Virginia!