American Sentence CV
Passengers hum remembered regrets, rails ringing, sorrowing a song.
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Passengers hum remembered regrets, rails ringing, sorrowing a song.
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“sorrowing a song.”
Gold.
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regrets, rails ringing- love the alliteration!
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I agree with Linda on the lovely alliteration!
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“Sorrowing the song” is just what rails do! Accurate and poiugnant!
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Surprising sounds here, since I think of rails humming. Nice way to mix it up, Pam!
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Oh, wow! Pam, this is awesome. I love the word “sorrowing” here. Yes! 💜
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Shew, “sorrowing a song.” You are so good at these and build so much empathy into each Sentence
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Pam, I read this poem as reflecting while riding on the railroad of life!
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Gorgeous, Pam.
Funny: the feeling of this poem captures almost exactly the meditative state I fall into on train trips. I want to say Get out of my head! But you’re welcome there, at least this once.
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You weave together perfect sounds for the rolling train. It often elicits “sorrowing a song.”
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Stunning!
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Love the rhythm propelled by repeated liquid /r/ sounds, producing rolling, rushing movement of “rails ringing.” Well done, Pam
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I’ll echo the “sorrowing a song” but actually I love it all! When I read these poems, I also get that slight bouncy feeling of being on a train ride!
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This might be my favorite sentence thus far. Great music! You just can’t keep those “remembered regrets” far from mind.
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This is great scene building.
Thanks, Eric!