American Sentence CX
Cowboy studies last swallow of whisky, beaded light, reads like tea leaves.
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Cowboy studies last swallow of whisky, beaded light, reads like tea leaves.
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Made me think of Kenny Rogers.
Thanks im gonna put that on in the morning.
Yep, Kenny would do that!
I like how the cowboy treats the moment as its own sort of ceremony with that mention of reading tea leaves.
Thanks L., many a pondering comes with that last swallow
Fascinating scene!
Thanks, Linda!
I’m gonna half to look into the bottom of my whiskey glass, Pam, to see what Cowboy sees!
heehee….Perhaps a poem will come from that look!
The images you create with these sentences are just amazing! I love the “beaded light”. Yes!
thanks.!..beaded light came last…trying hard to capture the pause
Pam, I’d be curious to know the message in the tea leaves!
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This is going to be such a rich story once it’s all put together. Love how Cowboy studies his last sip like tea leaves.
Thanks, Eric. Following Cowboy. He is taking me to the right places!
I keep thinking you can’t take me any deeper with the cowboy, and then you add more layers! This one might be my fav (although don’t hold me to that lol!)
Lol, I am glad to hear this!
The complexities of Cowboy. I can see him as he “studies that last swallow,” but what does he read?
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This one is amazing, Pam – I love the idea of beaded light in the whiskey glass!
Thanks, Nancy. I was struggling with how to describe that…Cowboy led the way!
Wonderful! “like tea leaves” creates intrigue!
Thanks, Michele!
You did it again, Pam. How do you manage to fit so much, so beautifullt crafted into such a small receptacle. Your sentence make me think of the ships built in a bottle. Except you fit a whole train and so much more. Now,what does the cowboy read in the tea leaves?
Thank you, Fanny! Lots of sitting on the train inside the skin of Cowboy, Railway Cat, and Woman, and pondering the good questions and wonderings of all who are kind to comment produces a great mother lode to mine!
As to the tea leaves Cowboy reads….😉