American Sentence CXIV
Shimmers of strummed purr-rolls drift to Woman, waterfalling her awake.
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Shimmers of strummed purr-rolls drift to Woman, waterfalling her awake.
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Love to see these characters starting to interconnect more! Also love the word choices here to describe the sound of a cat’s purr waking someone up.
Thanks, L.!
WOW! “Waterfalling her awake.”
Thanks, Linda!
Yeah me too “waterfalling her awake.”
What !!!!!!
Poet, you amaze.
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Me three!
I love that the woman is drifted back into the story.
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“strummed purr-rolls” is deliciously onomatopoeic.
Thanks, Jeremy!
“Waterfalling” is just brilliant! Pam, you’ve done it again. Wow!! 💜
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Another fan of “waterfalling” — beautiful line.
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You’ve outdone yourself with “waterfalling,” Pam!
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Ditto on “waterfalling” image. The rhythm here is gorgeous!
Had waterfalls originally but loved the movement in waterfalling best. Glad it took!
Agree with all of the above comments, Pam. Reading your Sentence aloud highlights its gentle rhythms that produce a deeply vibrating experience. This poem embodies cat’s purr
Glad you caught that, L.!
All of the above said it better! Bravo for initiating some connection!
Thanks, Greg!
“Waterfalling her awake” —-excellent!
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A compelling song.
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“waterfalling” – soon to be a classic!
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I was waiting for the camera to pan back over to our other character. Interesting word choices, “waterfalling” and “purr-rolls” Great job, as ever!
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