American Sentence CXVI
I will sing you lullabies; I will heal what’s broken, I will keep you.
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I will sing you lullabies; I will heal what’s broken, I will keep you.
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Nice! It has the rhythm of the train…..subtle and wonderful!
And “will”
end of month finery!
Glad it holds the rhythm of the train.
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Pam you are such a pro at these. I want to hang with this person who’s singing, healing, keeping. Beautiful.
Thanks, Bill. This one sung its way on the page.
This one is so very sweet and lovely.
Thanks L.!
Like how the last few words are in italics!
Thanks, Linda. That was a last minute decision!
Oh, I can hear that sing, because this sentence sings! I agree with Linda. The italics are perfect! 💜
Glad you hear the music and appreciate the affirmation on italics! 💜
Trobairitz on the train. The sentence sings soft and full of promise.
Looked up trobairitz…thanks, Virginia, for opening the door to learning about them and love the ‘sings soft’ in your reply!
You’re finishing this month on a very strong note. This one resonates, one of my favorites!
Thanks, Lee! This one came from my heart.
Wow. “I will sing you lullabies” moving to a promise to heal what’s broken…then promising to keep. A weighted and passionate and beautiful line.
Thanks, Eric. Meant in multiple ways…glad you got it.
I feel the train slowing down – love the lullabies!
Thanks, Nancy….me too! 💜
Beautiful, Pam.
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Drawing the month and this part of the ride to a gentle close…
Yep! 😊
This feels almost biblical. Fragile and affirming.
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I feel the train lulling us slowly into the station. But I don’t want to get off!!
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OooOoooo!!!!
Love!!!
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