American Sentence CXVIII
Cowboy thumb thumps the bass; a seat away, Woman hums; Railway Cat purrs.
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Cowboy thumb thumps the bass; a seat away, Woman hums; Railway Cat purrs.
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Thanks for riding the train ❤️
Shew I’m not ready to disembark! I love how we got to linger with them a while this June.
Awww, thanks for riding the train ❤️
see you next year…Railway Cat is insisting more poem time 😉
What a beautiful ending to the sequence! Fantastic June, such a joy to read your work.
Thanks for riding the train ❤️
Peaceful, hopeful ending. Loved this train ride. I can hear the thumbing and the moving sounds along the track.
Thanks for riding the train ❤️
Your American Sentence
series is a classic.
Thanks for riding the train ❤️
Great train ride- they are all together!
Thanks for riding the train ❤️
I agree with Shaun!!! I need to keep following these characters! Pam, your poetry is amazing. Thank you for gifting it to us! 💜 See you next June…on that train!
Awww, Thanks for riding the train ❤️ And yes to next June…on that train!
A nice little symphony they play together, and a nice set of stories you’ve told us this month!
Thanks for riding the train ❤️
Awww, Thanks for riding the train ❤️ And yes to next June…on that train!
They are all there together, riding those rhythmic rails. Take care, Pam. I’ll see you soon.
Thanks for riding the train ❤️
See you soon, Nancy!
And the journey keeps unfolding. Thanks for the ride, Pam!
Thanks for riding, Kevin…more to unfold…next year! ❤️
I hear the echo of the train—and all its inhabitants—pulling away. I’m left sad, but satisfied. Happy to have made this journey.
Thanks for riding the train, Mary. I will miss the train until next year….❤️
A harmonious conclusion to the month! Was so fun to follow along
Whew….was a little worried as the month came to a close…..Thanks for riding the train, N.D. ❤️
You ARE going to compile your sentences into a book, aren’t you? Excellent stuff, Pam. Evocative, sometimes challenging, frequently calming, always worthwhile. Thanks for a great month.
Working on a song, Sorrowing a Song, for the three of them expanding Cowboy, Women, and Railway Cat a bit more…although Railway Cat is wanting her own song ☺️
And yes, I WILL compile the sentences in a book…sections are beginning…
Thanks for the questions along the way!
Thanks for the series. Makes me want to take a real train ride. Maybe we should arrange a LexPoMo ride!
Love that idea, Larry!
Thanks for riding this train ❤️
😀 This Sentence sings, Pam!
🎶Happy ‘rails” to you until we meet again🎶
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Pam—I look forward to reading your American Sentence poems every year! Thank you for your genius!
Awww, Kim, Thanks for riding the train ❤️
A wonderful, musical ending to this part of the journey! Looking forward to hearing the song as it develops!!
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I will sing what I have to you next time we meet. 🎶
An evocative slice of life- you have painted an entire cinematic scene full of warmth and music. As you have with each of your American Sentences. Until 2027. 💙✨
Thanks for riding the train. 🎶 Yes, until 2027. 💙
OK, I’m just an interloper now. I just hopped on the caboose! I’m sorry I missed so many stops along the way on your brilliant journey!
Caboose is good…glad you hopped on! 💜
Love the musicality of “thumb thumps.” Thank you for all your poetry and kind words this June, Pam!
🎶 Thanks for riding the train, Katrina! 💜
Yes! Absolutely love the final harmony. So well done, Pam! I was thinking how this would end up all day–not disappointed. Was a pleasure reading your work over the course of the month. All the best, Pam!
Thanks for all your good wonderings and questions. Helped me get over the finish line.
Pleasure reading your work.
Until 2027 💜