An American Sentence VII
A child boards a train going somewhere, sling shot hanging from torn pocket.
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A child boards a train going somewhere, sling shot hanging from torn pocket.
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This is an interesting series. Strong images.
Thanks! Surprising myself with each person boarding this train.
vivid as ever…I sense intent. I agree–strong images rise up
Thanks! An intuitive intent.
I love this
Thanks, Shaun!
Very nice, Pam. All these trains have me wondering – where are we going????
Thanks, Nancy! Following my instincts here and being surprised too!
Again, wonderful form, and you do it so well. Powerful, succinct, great images. I’m hooked.
Thanks, Allen! I am pulled by the phrase ‘boards a train going somewhere.’
Another good train sentence…I like where it’s going–literally!
Thanks, Greg! I wonder who will show up next?!?
Perhaps WCW who spent many poems trying perfect his own line will show up as a ghost…
lol…perhaps