And
And
my favorites
are you and
next would be hummingbirds or
daffodils in spring
and let’s not forget poetry,
written suspended on invisible wings
in
lines across, then down the page,
lines repeating
in the following stanza, but not
all lines, not one, not
many, but
some.
my favorites
are you and
next would be hummingbirds or
daffodils in spring
and let’s not forget poetry,
written suspended on invisible wings
in
lines across, then down the page,
lines repeating
in the following stanza, but not
all lines, not one, not
many, but
some.
And
my favorites
are you and
next would be hummingbirds or
daffodils in spring,
and always poetry.
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“suspended on invisible wings” is my favorite image holding the poem together.
Thanks, Gaby. It is good to read your work again.
next would be hummingbirds– the perfect energy injecting transition.
Hummingbirds and poetry can suspend in space for long periods. Thanks for reading, Christopher.
The shape of the poem is light and airy — something with wings that flew into my morning and made me smile.
Good to read your work again, Rudy.
Thank you, Sylvia.
You are first to mention shape. You are on to something with that reply. I know what it is, even if you have not seen it yet.
I love everything about this!
As always, Deanna, you are a favorite reader.
really enjoyed reading this… love the images of hummingbirds, daffodils and poetry… keep up the good work…
Thanks, Michelle, I enjoy having a reader like you, for sure.