Animal, Atlantic
Green water.
Not the turquoise of postcards.
The Atlantic of New England.
Cold enough
to get your attention.
The surface stippled
with sunlight.
Beneath it,
currents jockeying
with one another.
A school of silver fish
turns all at once.
The seaweed lifts
its long green fingers.
A wave arrives.
Another.
Another.
Farther out,
a cormorant disappears
into the water
and pops back up
glistening and pleased with itself.
The salt gathers
on my lips and shoulders.
The tide rearranges
everything.
Like a messy bed remade slightly
differently each morning.
A gull screams triumph.
The horizon holds steady.
The water does not.
I float.
Then kick.
Then dive.
My body is happier
when it remembers
it is an animal.
A wave rolls underneath.
Then another.
Then another.
The sun on my face.
Salt on my tongue.
I am weightless.
I am in.
6 thoughts on "Animal, Atlantic"
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This is very visual, almost cinematic, which makes sense, given your background in film. But where’s the soundtrack (the sound effects such as slant rhyme and the descriptions of ocean sounds)?
I suppose they are lying on the beach next to my swimsuit? I like a naked poem, what can I say?
But I see what you mean. I feel the silence, too. I will contemplate that.
I am always trying to write this poem about the beach and the water! What a blessing! I love it.
Thank you, River!
Your poem brought back good memories of the cold Atlantic on the New England coast.
you capture the feeling of being buffeted around by the tide