At Sunrise
A pale orange light leaks through
trees in this small urban park.
Mist, rising from the river, floods
the path I walk, settles on my skin.
It makes ghosts of other walkers
who take form as they approach,
dissolve again as they pass. Birds,
all voice, no form, decorate the silence.
very nice.
I love the last line! And how the mist makes ghosts.
Thanks Roberta!
all voice, no form, decorate the silence is a wonderful wonderful line
I loved “take form as they approach/dissolve again as they pass”–so simple in its description and rhythm.
So rich in detail and meaning. Beautiful.