Bluebirds in Barbourville, March 7
with fluting trills
they flutter and follow
restless with spring
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with fluting trills
they flutter and follow
restless with spring
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Exquisite and sensory.
“fluting” is a great verb here – the picture and poem capture that restless need for movement and growth in spring
“restless in spring” lets the poem fly!
Yes! & I am alwsys a bit restless at spring! Love that line—I also think I was more restless in spring when I was just about to learn to fly and couldn’t wait to go away to college!
I love the alliteration! It gives the piece that exactly action of a spring songbird
Delightful
Energetic and majestic.
Fluting! I need to use that words in a poem. 🍒🐞🍓
The “f” sounds give this poem extra flight. Love it!
I can feel the flutter, ready to fly.
Beautiful!
This was a sweet one!