Borrowed Plumage
Shall I compare you to a magpie’s nest
of thorn and twine, of wool and weathered thread?
A feather from a starling’s speckled breast,
and a receipt the winter left for dead,
a hollow sound lined with a tuft of hare,
and that stray syllable snagged on the brambles –
I’m drawn to all things thought beyond repair
and drop them in here – in veritable shambles.
You – unpopped kernel lodged between my teeth,
a tune still looking for a pair of lungs,
the ghost of pine inhabiting the wreath –
your sweetest note’s the one that stayed unsung.
Rampant with rhymes and roots that learned to roam –
a place the mind could haunt, or call a home.
6 thoughts on "Borrowed Plumage"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
❤️
Adore this poem. Your use of rhyme and meter is masterful. Thanks so much for your work this month.
I love everything about this – especially the conclusion.
Thank you to everyone who organized this challenge and to all of you for your thoughtful feedback!
This was my first poetry challenge (I usually spend much more time translating poetry than writing my own). As a non-native English speaker and also someone who’s not part of the local community, I really appreciate all the support and your kind words.
I hope it’s the first of many.
Actually would you mind emailing me at kevinnancepoetry@gmail.com? I have a proposal for you.
My goodness, I had forgotten you were not first-language English speaker. It’s been lovely to read your work this month. This is my first LPM as well; what a treat it has been. I’m spending today in the dark writing so that when tomorrow comes I will have already proven to myself that I can keep producing even though LPM is over. But I gotta admit I’m pretty sad about it. Thanks for all the pieces you shared this month. I just sent this one to a friend I walked miles with in France last year and with whom I saw my first magpie. She didn’t know there were people who hadn’t seen them before, since she’s Irish, but it was lovely to see my first one in an urban forest along the river at fullsun 9:30pm. Hard to be too ill to be there and know I can’t get well without being there in EU food territory, but really special to see this poem today. Thank you.