I Never Meta Haiku I Didn’t Like
1: Five
Maybe if I try
Really hard, just sit down and
Concentrate, I can
Write a haiku full
Of haikus. Wouldn’t that be
Fun? Yes, but no fair
Using filler words
To pad the lines. No cheating
Words to favor form.
Let the rope wrinkles
Unwrinkle as they will, as
They must. Medium
And message mingle,
It’s true, and yet the simple
Haiku transcends both.
2: Seven
A lover laughed at
My love of all things meta.
I think she thought I
Overused the word,
Applying it too often.
Indiscriminate,
Willy-nilly. And
She was probably right. I
Am indeed given
To hyperbole–
Exaggeration, even.
But I confess when
Real is layered and
Marbled with adjacent Real,
I find the surreal
Revealed. The Reals yield,
And fade in importance — a
Reality I
Love to live. Like a
Haiku full of haikus: that
Is some meta shit.
Three: 5
I love to chase a
Haiku’s wrinkles until they
Unfold and reveal
Their truths beneath my
Fingers. I think of rope that
Needs straightened. I think
This of all writing.
Not a great analogy,
I cannot deny.
But look what it can
Do — what it did! I chased those
Rope wrinkles ’til they
Unwrinkled, and lo!
Behold! Meta unlocked: A
Haiku of haikus.
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This is so fun and creative! I never would have thought to create a haiku of haikus. Very meta indeed😂👏
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it 🙂 Fun is good!
This is fantastic. Creative and spot on. Definitely beyond my skill level. Thanks for sharing.
Wow, thank you so much! I really appreciate it 🙂 Keep writing!
This is bravura stuff. I’ve written haiku sequences before but never thought to have them bleed into one another like this. A tour de force.
Thank you so much. 🙂
I literally said Bravo! when I got to the end. Very well done and fun to read.
Thank you! I certainly had fun writing it 🙂
Meta unlocked…I love this!
Thank you! 🙂 I am glad you enjoyed it.