Chinatown Diamond
There are things you can’t unhear.
For me, it’s the time someone tried to tell me
that they loved me.
He told me with a quivering voice
And it took everything I had
not to laugh. For we were so young-
not even 16.
And when I didn’t say it back,
he started to cry
and told me that it wasn’t fair
for him to say that. And for me to be
silent.
So I swallowed my pride
and choked out the words
I
Love
You
Too.
With all the sincerity of a Chinatown diamond.
4 thoughts on "Chinatown Diamond"
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Great narrative, nice turn at the end.
never heard “chinatown diamond” before & couldnt find any reference for it, so i dont know if your sincerity was honest or facetious. i know that you found his quiver funny & didnt think you felt the same, but it hinges on the chinatown diamond meaning.
I find the honesty in this to be forthright, and the Chinatown Diamond to be an excellent comparison. I believe you are going to reach your full potential this time around.
Ouch! Unfortunately we are all get to experience rejection in love. And life. Especially writers.