dandelions
when I look out across the yard
at yellow dots, then
flip up the phone so
it recognizes my face, then
search for dandelion honey
or tea or jelly or a dozen
other uses of useless weeds
when I stoop and shuffle
across the yard, picking
am i reconnecting
to ancestral ways, of
what you had you grew,
or is it just some hippy dream
in between snaps
when I think of mamaw,
how she’d never do this,
a days work for three jars
of sugared water when you
could just walk to the store
and get it sweeter
for just a dollar or two
child, you need to use your head
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Tik Tokkers, meet our grandmas! Ha ha! I love this, especially the voice in the last line.
Fun poem! Dandelion wine????
You know, I could’ve sworn I listed that in the poem. It was one of the things I searched for that day cause I’ve always wanted to make dandelion wine!
Love the logic in the last few lines, nice write!
I love this. Memaws always know.
I love everything about this poem. It definitely made me think of my Mamaw’s wisdom.
Allen I have to agree with pretty much of the comments. It made reflect on past childhood memories of my granny sitting under the apple, with her fan and sun Ice tea. That was the richness of sugar water.
I love the way you take us with you through the yard and hear the thoughts about your thoughts of what you are doing…”ancestral ways” and ” some hippie dream”….the voices in your head as you submerge into this activity.
It does flow and I really loved reading it. The last stanza made me smile—Thank you!
Well ended and said:
child, you need to use your head