Dear Heart
More than blood and beat
You cull our savage shadows
Bless seed Lust the moon
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More than blood and beat
You cull our savage shadows
Bless seed Lust the moon
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This poem packs a punch!
“You cull our savage shadows ”
Yeah!!
Love this!
Thank you, H.A.! Your comments are always appreciated!
Love the depth of “Dear Heart.”
So much to write about the heart, it was hard to simmer it down!
Love: “Bless seed Lust the moon”
Thank you, Pam. I tried to get a cowboy into the poem, but he’s loyal to you!
Lust the moon!
Always!
“cull our savage shadows” Wow!
Thank you, Mike! Loved the language in your poem today.
a peek into the wild Sylvia
Look away!
“You cull our savage shadows.” Powerful, Sylvia!
Thanks for reading and commenting, John!
Wow — “our savage shadows”! Packs a delicious punch!
Thanks, Bill! I was dancing around in the shadows until the word “savage” came into view.
Oh, I love this.
Thank you so much, Karen!
Wonderful
Thanks for the comment from a haiku wizard!
😁
Great punch in these few words, Sylvia!
Thanks, Nancy! Love your haiku from today. Enjoy most sheep-related poetics!
Powerful paean to heart, Sylvia. Love the impactful form “Lust the moon”
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, L!
Wow! “cull our savage shadows” brings such visceral depth to this heart.
So much power is contained here!
That opening works so well
It’s a spiritual force!
I esp. like the sound and image of “blood and beat.”
“Lust the moon” drove it home!
Short and powerful.