Our love is like chocolate in a factory
pouring over unsuspecting peanuts
making movie candy.
It coats and surrounds and shields what’s inside.
And maybe that’s the way to describe us —
two distinct ingredients
who join to make something even better.
You make my life sweeter, and
you give my life more substance and sustenance.
I love you, Goober.
This is delightfully sweet. And a little nutty.
Very sweet indeed!
Like everyone has said, this is sweet in a variety of ways!
This is a great Love poem–and I love the three opening lines in particular–and the idea of “making movie candy.” specifically–which was totally unexpected. Everything just sounds right–great job! Thanks