Each Drop Drops
You’re rolling off
then gathering steam
with other drops;
drags you down
down, you go
down, you flow
here, on river’s edge,
the last I’ll see
Inspired by this site https://river-runner.samlearner.com/
An elegy for raindrops! What a great idea.
I enjoyed the free release and simultaneously sad quality of this piece.
I was particularly engaged by “the last I’ll see of you.”
Beautiful and lyrical. I can hear a song in this.
down, down, down,
gravity and grey..
transported me to John Hartford’s ‘…mystery above…mystery below…’ tune. I love magic carpet poems
Thank you all!