Errant Thoughts While Kayaking the Kentucky River
Water as brown as
Willy Wonka’s chocolate
river, only not
nearly as sweet. Hope we don’t
tip, pull an Augustus Gloop.
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Ha! “not / nearly as sweet.” — its a cruel world that creates chocolate-looking rivers that taste like … river.
Lol….great line breaks!
Precision paddling
of the gloop.
“don’t/
tip”
This is a fun one.
Nice tanka, Chelsie! Vivid and funny.
Love it when a shape of a poem propels movement:
don’t/
tip
Oompa Loompa! Fun read, Chelsie!