Five minutes?!?!?
Waiting impatiently through the little moments
That make up the gaps between
The fun she expects of her existence
I know she cannot conceive
Of the years that will pile on before her
She lives as though it must be consumed at once
As though she knows her time is up
At age twelve
As hungry and determined
As an able-bodied thirty-something
Counting down the days to
Execution
Now, now, and now!
Waiting is painful
But it’s only a little lesson
On accepting time and its
Cold, finite terms and conditions
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are you saying that for a preteen time is like being on death row?
For some of the more morbid ones, I’m sure. But it’s about my little girl who wants everything at that very moment as though she had absolutely no time to spare.
ever explain the concept of 5 minutes to a 4 yr old? that undertaking can age your soul…
LOL…Miss Chi Chi is four, but she does live with the exuberance of someone who knows their days are numbered. But she will grow very, very old and content in her wisdom and longevity.
It reads differently from a 4yr old perspective than the teen I imagined. Reading it again I understand better. Maybe a clue in the title or poem itself would help me as a reader see what you’re seeing. It’s a good poem!
I’ll try that when I do an edit, Mary–thank you!
It’s beautiful in a way but story telli g of a rough life to come,