For the Feel of It
Something is missing
I can’t quite place it
Je ne sais quoi if you will
But you won’t
You find it pretentious
Which is fair, but still
What am I to do
With all my ridiculous vocabulary?
I could deploy all of it here
Leave it all on the floor
And still not get to the core
Of what goes on between us
And what doesn’t
I dropped the initial declaration
Much too soon
Under a symphony of explosions
The balmy summer heat
And the blades of grass between my toes
Made for a pleasant waiting room
As you pondered whether or not
To return the sentiment
Oh my god…
What are we doing?
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The last two lines are on repeat in my head constantly.
I know the feeling, it’s like a communication war of attrition with some folks some of the time, the last two lines take this poem from pondering/posturing of an event/phenomena to a true inner monologue, one we can all get behind
An excellent relationship poem, and a greater question in summation.
Your voice really shines through in this one.