Foreshadowing
I won’t burst into the living room
with a celebratory scream.
I won’t cry tears of joy
or any tears at all.
When I emerge
from the cramped half bath
with flushed cheeks and a white stick
marked by two pink lines, he’ll shrug,
I won’t believe it
until you get past twelve weeks,
and I will deflate
like a popped balloon.
But first, swaddled
for a moment by this tiled sanctuary,
I hold the evidence
in reverent hands.
My whisper escapes,
a premonition or a prayer.
Here we are, kid.
It’s just you and me.
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This poem is heart wrenching. I like how you begin it – the title and first lines. Also like swaddled by this tiled sanctuary!
Thanks, Julie.
Thankfully, the mom has a joy and life force that is sustainable. Good poem!
<3 thanks!
This is so well done-the reactions tell the story.
Powerful poem, Chelsie. I like how your voice is “swaddled” by the bathroom, the sanctuary. And a perfect title.
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That ending is the gut punch – here we are, the foreknowledge of how it’s going to go down. Love this, Chelsie!
An intimate look into the difficult part of motherhood. Well done!
Love how the ending words of the last three stanzas make their own little poem—
Swaddled sanctuary evidence hands escapes prayer
Kid
Me.
love this communion of mother and child
the reversal of a few moments… This poem will stay with me for a while.
Ah… this feels so complete and true and well said. I wish for your partner to be more sensitive. I wish for you to run and scream and cry, as those small words at the end, whispered in secret seem to indicate your feelings. I wish for someone to hug you and share your joy. No need to believe it, it is here and true right now.
Whew.
So many “withins” here. Hope. Possible grief mirrored. Shirking oneself. Dismissed. But the Unique Connection that is shared in the last two lines, is the real story.