Freedom Has Cracked
Let freedom ring as mighty as our liberty bell.
The people sing: Give me liberty, or give me death!
Let freedom ring across highs and lows, above and below
all lands, all people, with all pursuits of happiness.
Crack, the liberty bell groans, a snap in its exterior,
an undetected defect. Let freedom ring! The people demand,
behind the bell jar with no sound, nothing.
This bell is merely symbolic, the government says,
ushering the people to ring their king instead. No kings,
the people protest, no dictators! Their diction is lost
in the noise of uncertain revolution. Let freedom ring,
our founding fathers say. Give me liberty, or give me death.
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That tension between the people’s demand and the hollow sound is powerfully done.
Agreed. I can’t say it better than Jeremy did :). Spot on.
“Crack, the liberty bell groans” is soooooo goooood <3
This reminds me so much of Amanda Gorman’s work. What a whole lot of work you are getting done in such a tiny space though. Wow. Thanks for being this good at political commentary that’s just slammingly strong nondogmatic poetry.
Such high praise, thank you Elle! I’ll have to check out her work. I enjoy writing the political commentary poems and am happy to inspire.