God is a feeling
crawdads snails and striders
in pockets of droughted creek
with Evyn, who has been kind
since childhood, and wanting
to be that kind, the kind
of creature who bursts through
the water and makes grown
women laugh like babies
at Gulf Shores, remembering
their entire lives in full
upon the glance of a dolphin,
to be a knight in shining promises
pilling irises behind the miracle
that wishes you home one more
time before the firing squad
assassinates. turning to feel
the bonfire on the calves.
listening to Ocean talk or Ada
read. the pink bruise of meaning
kiss. understanding the joke.
9 thoughts on "God is a feeling"
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I love the glorious rush of this poem and envy the ocean of detailed memories.
I like that Deanna this poem as a “rush.” Perfection description. Lovely work.
I really love:
who has been kind
since childhood, and wanting
to be that kind,
Your work is so sweet and beautiful. The world is made infinitely more wonderful by you being in it. Listening to Ocean talk or Ada read… I also love listening to River talk, and River read. Love you so much.
Well IIII love listening to Lily talk and Lily read!! So guess life is just really awesome.
River, I love the journey you take us on in this poem, and how intimate and tender it is.
Also I love these lines:
“who has been kind
since childhood, and wanting
to be that kind,”
Yes, please more kindness!
Yessss: who has been kind
since childhood, and wanting
to be that kind,
River – your poem flows like the river you are – so many nice phrases – droughted creek – a knight in shining promises – the pink bruise of meaning. Love the unexpected little twists!
You capture things so unexpectedly but so well!
I love “…the kind
of creature who bursts through
the water and makes grown
women laugh like babies
at Gulf Shores, remembering
their entire lives in full
upon the glance of a dolphin”