God Pretends
Bees are drunk in the red bud
and god pretends she doesn’t see
us watching. She blushes, like the sun
after cloudy days, and rushes to see
more than we can: colors not meant for our eyes,
cells too small for our magnifying abilities,
insects deep in some wooded slope, systems
in our human body and neighborhood
galaxies undiscovered yet. She blushes
even more pleased, like a child finding
her feet. And her feet—the creator’s feet—
stretch all the way to our core.
“when god prays to himself/ using the fog’s opaque cushion, we know god is a child/ who pretends to pray” from “Fog” by Vi Khi Nao.
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Children are the future.
If we destroy the future are we destroying God?
I love every word and image of this poem.
Thanks, Jim and Carole. The last two lines are meant only as information where the initial idea came from. There should have been more space between the poem and the note.
I am enjoying reading all the poems and I enjoy those who read as well!
She blushes, like the sun
after cloudy days—-such a terrific simile.
Moving poem.
K. Bruce Florence
well done, such beautiful imagery.