god troubles the waters
anyway, i prefer wading
never learned to swim
taught myself to sink
dont mind drowning
not here, not now…
i flotsam in good glory
free will floats down
to the bottom of love
wishing we had met &
made time making babies
instead spittle dabs
the open palm & dries
in the creases of a life line
until time passes
(cold molasses)
lips drop shadow
& poem drops a dime
so i raise up from shallow
waters / sir, knows
devoid of cogitation:
this side of grass
was always green.
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So many good lines here, but “i flotsam in good glory” followed by “free will floats down” and the last stanza are really excellent.
really like free will floats down to the bottom of love
The voice and chosen syntax here is amazing and wholly your own, sir. You don’t do the expected, ever, and reading you is like walking the edge of a blade. Huzzah!
Powerfully simple. Simply powerful.
instead spittle dabs
the open palm & dries
in the creases of a life line
until time passes Love these lines!
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The five-line stanza is my favorite.