A Museum of Small Sadnesses
The neighbors move
in and out so fast and you never see
their faces. It is morning
and I hear bumping and
cursing in the dark. I think of you
from my apartment, a museum
of small sadnesses: motes of dust
of small sadnesses: motes of dust
a reliquary of the people
you have been. Filled with
bits of tobacco and their names
like smoke, like strikes–
beat against the kettledrum
of your body.
beat against the kettledrum
of your body.
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The title is incredible, nice!
Thank you!
This is so lovely, Shaun! The title belongs on a book of your poems. – I agree with jst.
Thank you! It definitely seems to fit my poems so far this month!
a museum
of small sadnesses
I love it.
Thank you, Arwen!
Exquisite, Shaun – from title through to the end.
Thank so much, Nancy!
Really like this, Shaun! Great title.
Thank you, Jasmine!
Love this title.
and this line:
oops the line I was mentioning disappeared! Here it is again:
a museum
of small sadnesses: motes of dust
a reliquary of the people
you have been.
Thank you so much, Pam!
“like smoke, like strikes” — my favorite line, but the whole poem is a very fresh use of language, the title describing at once the world of anonymity and a personal world.
Thanks, Greg! That’s the weird thing about some spaces, how private and public intersect
Agree with the above that the title is priceless, so too are your observations: those motes of dust work really well. Nice one Shaun.
Thanks, Bill! At some point, I’m going to have to pull out the Pledge and a cloth :p
This poem (title and all) is exquisite and heartbreaking–I wanted to steal that ending image.
In hindsight, I think I kinda stole it from Amy Lowell’s short poem The Taxi, perhaps! Thanks so much, Karen–and I hope you do use the image for your own poetic devices!
Priceless title and excellent poem. Should be a book of poems!
Thank you, Linda! I think a lot of poets dream of a book some day, and I’m no exception :p I’ll have to keep this one in mind!
Shaun
you’ve caught the essence of sadness
that it’s small
in life & sadness not everything can be explained and the mysteries of your poem make it exquisite
Thanks so much, Jim.
Awesome poem. I especially like the title; it can take you anywhere. As a former apartment dweller, I relate to it.
Thanks, Lee. It’s definitely an experience being a long-term tenant!
This is so beautiful and you helped me learn a word: reliquary!
Thank you Austin! I’ve been obsessed with these liturgical words lately.
Such a poignancy about this piece–it’s short but so profound.
Thank you so much, T.M.