Hard Candy
On car trips,
long, short,
everything in between,
mom brings a bag of hard candy
that she can never make last.
A peppermint finds its way
to her mouth
and she crunches down
almost immediately.
She grabs another one and says
“I’ll make this one last
the next ten miles”
but in the same breath
it’s already gone.
I unwrap one
and it crumbles
under my teeth.
My mom laughs and says
“You got the biting gene.”
As each of us goes for another, she says
“surely this one,”
determined to make it last.
The car races on,
pavement blurring by
as the future takes me
to my third city in four years.
Another peppermint
disappears down my throat–
jagged pieces of yet another tough pill,
and the sound of bone
grinds on bone as I think
“surely this one.”
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Love the layers and metaphor of the hard candy and the moves.
I really enjoyed this, thank you for sharing it. This is the first poem of yours I’ve come across. Really evocative and a lot of vectors to continue it or make it into lots more things if one wanted to, but also really complete in itself. I love the combination.