For wheat is wheat, even if it looks like grass at first
Vincent van Gogh
Here we stand surrounded by limbs
cricketing and these deer clatters
slipping on scree. The stars whisper
to none yet. Sky is clear, trees bloom
in coral outcroppings and birds are
colorful noisy fish. How can the wind
remain while we stand in the currents
fly fishing at new words we can write
and throw like rippling nets over land.
Poets gathered among themselves
build community, format a message
and now the echoes organize space,
glisten into the fine colorful threads
of new guide bands. We may be here
or dreaming on that distant bridge
but let it never be said that we did not
stand and speak. That we did not plant
with seeds of small blue grasses here.
We breathe deep on this fist of a big
mountain erupting while being soaked
with everything new, by something that
is far older than any bones, something the
color of breath being given, being shared.
breathing the sky
hems up—stepping into streams
the sky breathing us
My soul needed this today. So many wonderful lines!!! I especially love:
‘We breathe deep on this fist of a big
mountain erupting’
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love…love…love”The stars whisper/to none yet.”
Energy swells in these lines “We breathe deep on this fist of a big/mountain erupting….”
Simply stunning: “breathing the sky
hems up—stepping into streams
the sky breathing us”
My favorite of yours this month (so far)
Oh ! You just made my day !!!
Thanks Pam ❤️
“let it never be said that we did not/
stand and speak.” I’d plant a heart emoji right here but I’m too tech challenged to do so. So you’ll just have to imagine a big old juicy heart. Love the whole poem, those lines welled me.
❤️ there ya go dear friend.
Thank you so much for your words and encouragement this month and otherwise.
I really like the stanza “Poets gathered among themselves/
build community, format a message/
and now the echoes organize space,” That’s when it really hit what kind of “husband” was being referred to in the title. Very cleverly done.
I had to read it again. Good catch!
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L. Thank you for all your readings of these this month. Your eye and ability to see the attempting toncreate sparks and easyer eggs. Is soooooo appreciated.
“…by something that
is far older than any bones, something the
color of breath being given, being shared.”
Wow. I read and re-read that part a few times. There is magic in there that sparks joy and understanding. Yes!
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I hear this as an occasional poem to honor our poetry month coming to an end
Yes, Gabby ❤️
“The sky is breathing us.” WE are the air.. Air is immortal, hence we are. Beautiful poem, Coleman.
😀 to quote a wise old man i once knew.
“…we are the island itself, risen up..”
love the ending!
Thanks for saying that Mike, I had left it off. Wasn’t sure. Now I like it ❤️
Loved the flyfishing simile. But such a strong community poem all around. Everyone participating in LexPoMo should enjoy this. Brilliant piece, Coleman!
Thanknyou Eric, it really has been a wonder to witness your talent this month.
Thank you for reading.
Fantastic, Coleman! At first I thought the husband in your title was yourself—and in that role you are most certainly a verb 😏—but then the most essential meaning was revealed. This poem is sheer perfection.
Lololololololol……yes and herself is an amazing Husband as well.
It’s a non gender specific thing 😉
“far older than any bones…
This is a wonderful avalanche of words.
Thank you Carole 😀
Yeah I heard that line one day earlier in the month…
For some reason it really has me thinking…..cuz in the grand scheme, things with bones aren’t really that old….which sounds funny when I say it out loud….lol
The title itself poked a hole in my perception and the rest of the work supported it. To husband. Very nicely done.
Yes ✨️ .
We are all husbanding 😀
Thank you Arwen, and thank you for all the reads and comments this month 😊
Such a well-crafted way to honor all the poets and poems this month! Love all the nature references (It’s in our nature to write!)
“fly fishing at new words we can write” – love this! (although some days it feels like trolling the bottom lol)
Thank you for all the forms you presented. I hope to take time to investigate them more and dabble in the months ahead. You have been a wise and encouraging shepherd!
Thank you Sylvia ❤️
And thanknyou for reading and comments all month.
Lol….yes !!! Sometimes the fishing is sparse…..lol