Today, In the Backyard, After Reading Walt Whitman
Churchbell’s round sound spools down my
I feel it all— every
sized switch flipped, tidal rhythm of
hair breeze-riffled, my blood
from tomato vine’s rising sighs, from
sun-dappled weedy patch of soil,
great wave, this shared air.
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This piece was great to read out loud. I like how you use the form: it gets to the spirit of Whitman
Very nice, Elaine – I especially like the immediacy of the last 5 lines.
Yesssss:”I float (miniscule mote!) upon this
great wave, this shared air.
The words tumble well on the tongue = definitely got the ghost of Whitman with you! Shade trees “drunk on light” – play and power there!
The form really aids the meaning, and grabs the reader!