Today, In the Backyard, After Reading Walt Whitman
Churchbell’s round sound spools down my
I feel it all— every
sized switch flipped, tidal rhythm of
hair breeze-riffled, my blood
from tomato vine’s rising sighs, from
sun-dappled weedy patch of soil,
great wave, this shared air.
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This piece was great to read out loud. I like how you use the form: it gets to the spirit of Whitman
Very nice, Elaine – I especially like the immediacy of the last 5 lines.
Yesssss:”I float (miniscule mote!) upon this
great wave, this shared air.
The words tumble well on the tongue = definitely got the ghost of Whitman with you! Shade trees “drunk on light” – play and power there!
The form really aids the meaning, and grabs the reader!
Love the sounds in this piece!
Walt Whitman spent his life, revising one book… That has to be the definition of something significant..,