Slewfoot Satellites
In the room: a small moon
rounds itself around the soft
and sudden pull of him.
Celestial bloom in the corner,
little ooooh the mouth has to make
to deliver such a word as croon,
swoon, succumb.
He looks up.
and looks—mm.
Marooned one,
Marooned one,
welcome to his gravity.
A body like this is not supposed
to be with a moon. Is not supposed to be
held to the cratered thing and
scanned, sized, sleeved in dusk.
scanned, sized, sleeved in dusk.
He doen’t say come back
when your chaperone’s asleep.
What moon can say: I felt you
orbit me? Outside, the sky
goes plum and bruise and lunar.
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Triple Shew, Shaun!
Especially love:
In the room: a small moon/rounds itself around the soft/and sudden pull of him.
a luscious wistful love poem complicating the tradition of love poems to the moon (I’m wandering to the gossip about Li Po drowning from embracing the reflection of the moon)
I love the way you use colors in the sky as a metaphor for stunning beauty and longing.
This poem combines a striking balance of longing and acceptance. Absolutely stunning work. I could read this again and again— and I will!
I like the cosmic dance of this desire.
Such a sadness and such beauty of words locked together. I like the moon (usually referenced with female bodies) is anchored to the male one. Slewfoot Satellites is intriguing. And, Shaun, how ridiculously fantastic that last line is!!!! To quote Pam who quoted you – Shew!
Oh !!!! Slewfoot returns!!!
I did not see this one when it came out. Glad I caught it now.
So well laid out love the way the second stanza has a fourth wall feel to it.
And the whole ache of it is moonlight and yearn.
Bravo poet !!!! Stunning.
Beautiful sounds and images in this poem!