Inspiration
Usually it comes all at once in a rush,
I struggle to keep up at the keyboard.
Never arriving perfect,
I’ll have to fiddle with a line
here or there or leave it for a time
and wait for the sublime image
to reveal itself.
There are days I forget poems come
from outside me,
and I’ll try to wring one
from the damp rag of my brain.
But these don’t have
the resonance of a bird cry
in forest, nor the density
of a cow in the field.
They are strained,
like dock rope in a hurricane,
the moving man’s muscles
on piano day.
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the difference between a poem seeming imposed from without, and the one you wrestle to the ground, really love how you highlight that there is a discernible difference.
A truth we all know so well delineated is a gift.
Thank you.
To mis-quote Greg Orr.
” it’s a lucky thing poems are worthless, we can give away the ones that save our own lives.”
“I forget poems come from outside me” < relatable. Usually when I feel my well is dry I have to stop trying and go live life for something to spark.
Also “the moving man’s muscles on piano day” is a great “strained” image!
love how the keyboard at the outset becomes the piano at the end, not to mention enjoying a poem about writing poems
liked a lot of snippets here.
but will be pondering today:
the density of a cow.
thanks for the homework..
But these don’t have
the resonance of a bird cry
in forest, nor the density
of a cow in the field.
Yes!
“The moving man’s muscles
on piano day.” Damn, Bill! That
says it all for me , that feeling
I have right now. The piano sits
on the sidewalk while the muscle-
bound movers take an extended
coffee break. Hopefully, the piano
will be in the house by the end of the
day and I’ll have some music to play.
Me too to Lee Chottiner
you got the struggle just right
I think we all feel it when we’re phoning it in, in life and in poetry. Thanks for this clarity on the difference.
Wow – yes, I can relate to this. Your images are spot on!
Wonderful description of the process
How relatable! I love this part the best:
There are days I forget poems come
from outside me,
and I’ll try to wring one
from the damp rag of my brain.