irritable
it is too hot.
it prompts stillness.
long eyelash blinks.
stillness permits
the thick and malignant dust.
it settles.
prompts
the urge to stomp
my foot like a horse.
(bug) if it would
shoo away (bug)
the thought of you.
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Concrete imagery and precise language usage vitalize the irritable. Feel the frustration, building of irritability. Use of lowercase makes the tone more personal. Well done, Anna