June Haiku
summer’s
sun
glitters
road glass
fragments
glisten
pine needles
translucent
summer’s
sun
glitters
road glass
fragments
glisten
pine needles
translucent
Lovely cascading langauge
Language! Haha
Interesting the way you explode the haiku form in terms of the three lines but stick to the classic 17 syllables. A concrete haiku, you innovator.
Really like how you elevate something as mundane as road glass into eye-catching glitter!