just in time
I keep writing poems to things:
like the moon and its ways of being
a moon,
despite my best efforts.
I couldn’t tell you anything
I saw today.
If this is a poem, it is a poem
about the moon. I know it’s there,
impassive yet also somehow–
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Love, love, love this. Yes it is a poem, dynamic and organic!
I’m glad I stayed awake to read this tonight. You might think you write poems about things, but you weave yourself in there so nicely!
I like the journey this took me on.
subtlety at its best
I love the way this one lingers after reading. Another fantastic write, Shaun.
I love the last stanza. The moon is sometimes otherworldly and indescribable.