Knicks in 4
A basketball swings
around the perimeter.
Hand to hand.
The point guard sees something.
A cutter appears.
The ball arrives exactly
where it was needed.
For a moment,
everyone involved
looks like they knew
what was going to happen.
Sometimes you throw the ball
and no one catches it.
You cut toward open space.
No pass arrives.
You spend months
perfecting your timing
only to discover
the other person
is playing pickleball.
Dink.
Pop.
Doink.
Dink.
Pop.
But every Monday evening,
the basketball leaves a hand.
The pickleball clears a net.
Someone calls for the ball
and someone answers.
For a moment,
movement is answered by movement.
Attention answered by attention.
The rare and beautiful experience
of not carrying the play
by yourself.
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I like your positive thinking! Great metaphors in this poem. “Someone calls for the ball and someone answers.” Let’s add baseball to the mix, you hit this one out of the ballpark.
Thank you, John! 🙂
Great title. Love the sounds and that glorious end “The rare and beautiful experience/of not carrying the play/by yourself.”
Thank you, Pam! 🙂
I appreciate this thought, too. The beauty of people trying to work together, to keep trying to succeed together. The joy of small victories and the generosity in forgiving small failures. Playing basketball only to discover yr in a pickle ball a game. Such a great metaphor for so much of life. And those short little sound words? Clap! Clap!
Haha! Thank you, Jules! 🙂
“You spend months
perfecting your timing
only to discover
the other person
is playing pickleball.”
That’s hitting so hard right now and I love it. Also the couplet about movement and attention. Life is worth living for those rare experiences and the good times they can create. Thank you for sharing this with us!
Thank you, Philip! I appreciate sharing with y’all very much.
I’ve been saying Knicks in 6, but only because it rhymes 😏
Or, dare I say, 7????
Lol
Love the metaphor with sports and life and you portrayed both quite well.
Thank you, Linda!