Love-Making
Crafting an Us was like sculpting
A marble block
Raw potential, simple lines, aggressive edges
We took turns holding the chisel
Which more often than not was used as a hammer
No tender strokes
But destructive blows
Chunks flying left and right
No way to put it back
It’s gone, that part
There goes yet another one
We took more than we brought
To the table
To each other’s time
To art
Crafting an Us was like sculpting
A shapeless chaos
Signed by our butterfingered hands
Precarious attempts
At love
And life
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I love how they both used the tool incorrectly. We can have all the preparation in the world, but once we’re in the moment it’s hard to hold onto all that we’ve learned.
Right! And let’s say theory and practice are two very different things.
Thanks for reading, Regan.
Fuuuuuuuuck, Angela.
Crafting an Us was like sculpting
A shapeless chaos
Signed by our butterfingered hands
A monster stanza. Reading this stanza had me wishing it was my creation. lol
Great poem!
Thanks, Doug!