Lucky Decisions
Sunday near the bar
A four leaf clover—
Let it be
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Sunday near the bar
A four leaf clover—
Let it be
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I like this one! It is very charming.
Thank you L.
😀
I heard the Kris Kristofferson song, Sunday Morning Coming Down, when I was reading. A complex haiku that conjures real narrative. Excellent.
Thanks 😀
Haiku is awesome that way
This poem charmed me. Love how much it holds in so few words.
Thanks Jeremy
Lots of depth in this tiny poem. Awesome!
Thank you
Sometimes the hardest thing to pull off is the simplest thing. You pulled it off here, Coleman.
Agree.
OK! !!!!Thanks 😀
Let it be indeed
Indeed. Thanks Mike 😀
What Mke said.
So deft a touch; “near the bar”
oops…need coffee…meant what Kevin said…”hardest thing…”
Lol……”dangerous without donuts”
Lol
heehee, agree!
well done!
Thank you Linda 😀
//speaking words of wisdom// what a nice haiku, so full
Arwen, yes yes !!!!!!
😊 thanks ❤️
Oh and the easter egg is for you
SAL = Salt = covenant
I think I’ve been at that bar, and the four-leaf clovers will knock you on your ass. JK – (I’m having too good of a Sunday!) Well played, Coleman!
Lololololololololololol
I’m in love with the juxtaposition between a bar and a four-leaf clover. That merits another round!
Thanknyou Lee 😀