Marriage Dance on Ice
It smothered the rooftops,
lawns & sidewalks, muted the sharp
edges of the city & flurried
around streetlights like fluffy frozen
dragonflies from another world.
My appetite for snow was insatiable.
I’d lace my Red Wing boots,
zip my pea green military parka,
fake rabbit around the hood.
Covered with thick ice,
the frosted trees clinked
a symphony. When it was below
zero, we snuggled up to the fire,
get lost in Satie’s “Gymnopédie No. 1.”
We’d dream of the future ahead.
Husband & I would grow sweet
corn & pickle Roma tomatoes.
Together, we’d trudge the iced-over
lake once a week. To avoid crashing
through, we had to keep moving, never give
the melting sheets a chance to spread
or collapse. O perfect glittering winterworld
how you conspired to insulate us
from coming pain. So much beauty
in the frozen dance! Even now
decades later, the ice world lures.
The preacher who agreed to perform
our Bohemian wedding directed us
to call when we had problems.
“It happens to everyone,” he insisted.
As the ice melted, we never once
asked for his comforting counsel
as the marriage melted around the edges
& collapsed.
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what a fantastic comparison! //To avoid crashing
through, we had to keep moving, never give
the melting sheets a chance to spread//
but the spring always comes
Thanks Arwen! It’s good seeing you this year. Yes, indeed, the Spring crashed through.
<3 it's good to see you too!
love how the title only becomes ironic after reading the poem
A gut punch of an ending—didn’t see it coming. and such tightly worded tercets. Well done, Linda.
Wonderful poem,
sliding like Johnny Weir
on thin ice—
Johnny Weir, my ice muse!
amazing how you can so clearly wrap up the life of a marriage in one poem
Brilliant storytelling.
Love the details here “I’d lace my Red Wing boots,/zip my pea green military parka,/fake rabbit around the hood.”
Love the foretelling here: “…we had to keep moving, never give/the melting sheets a chance to spread/or collapse.
and the ending even though you skated us to it still surprised me: “the marriage melted around the edges/& collapsed.”
I really loved those military parkas. Areal sign of the 70s.
yes 🙂
“So much beauty / in the frozen dance!” in all your poems, really. So many finely chosen images and details.
Thanks, Bill. I have to search for details to avoid writing cliche after cliche.🙃
Your details bring us in to the story- the joy and the pain.
I adore the way your poems seem constructed to be read aloud. Like fables.
I love how you play with images of ice, some joyful, and then end with the ice melting, the marriage collapsing. Beautiful poem. Such sadness, too.
Perfect song to use in the poem – Satie’s piece has always seemed like a slow glide over ice to me. Very much Peggy Flemming in its beauty and grace, no matter the undercoat of sadness. Your poems are a joy to read each day.
I was so caught up in the wintery descriptions, I was hit even harder by the unexpected ending. I especially enjoyed “like frozen fireflies from another world” and “the frosted trees clinked a symphony” which seemed almost fairytale.
O perfect glittering winter world 🙏
I know this story.
The ice was always temporary, and so was the marriage built on it. BUT I still didn’t see that ending coming!