Mom-Mom’s Lavender Farm
What we called my dad’s mother: Mom-Mom
Had to visit, to see, to smell and peruse the rows
Of lovely pristine lavender, proudly blooming
As busy bumble bees inject their long tongues
To extract nectar spreading pollen with their
Legs bloom to bloom, flitting ferociously
Witnessed white cabbage butterflies
Fluttering about with faint black spots
On their tips too quick for my camera
Inside a gazebo a group of guitars, banjo
Bass and singers lulled me with bluegrass
A dad of the banjo and guitar sat next to me
Asked, “How do you like the band?”
Proud dad extolled his sons’
Musical journey he facilitated for
Them to shine as his face shone
As they sang “Where is my mom?”
Tears welled in my eyes.
This epic day before Father’s Day.
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This seems like a very nice memory. I especially love the descriptions of all the bugs amidst the blossoms.
Some great language play in this poem! You really made the language sing.
This is a beautiful poem. I especially enjoyed “Witnessed white cabbage butterflies
Fluttering about with faint black spots
On their tips too quick for my camera”
You set the scene so well for us. 💜
Great mood-setting descriptive detail and effective ending
Such an unexpected ending, Linda. Well done!
So much heart and culture in this piece.
Love the sound and rhythm of “Mom-Mom”!
Love: “Witnessed white cabbage butterflies”
Tender and beautiful.
Lovely portrait!
Musically rhythmic and tenderly effective, Linda. Resonates with me as I prepare for next month’s music jam at lavender farm with family and friends. Thanks!
Love lavender and bluegrass! Beautiful!
This emotional shift at the end “Tears welled in my eyes. // This epic day before Father’s Day”” took me by surprise. Your piece is beautiful, so poignant.
Linda, this one of yours is especially beautiful. There is so much in this piece.