Morning Dove
“Soft like icey cream,” I tell him
referring to the way his fur splits,
like in that commercial for Breyers
where they pull the scoop through
layers of chocolate. I pet him
and his fur scatters the air. Yesterday,
my daughter (his mother) brushed him
and could have created another cat
from the fur he shed. That old coat,
the layer that shields against cold
but bears down oppressive in the heat,
served its purpose – bless and release,
they say, and he’s here before breakfast –
light as a feather. He, and I, and the pen
flying across my journal are the only
lively things ahead of the sun. The birds
start in but he watches me, bumps
my hand with his head and suggests
with a genteel paw that my phone charger
would be better off on the floor. His
deep purr is a coo of grief. He has come
to bear witness. I believe he knows
I am ending my own winter as well,
that I, too, have things to shed.
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I love the rich detail in this poem. The turn at the end is fantastic:
“He has come
to bear witness. I believe he knows
I am ending my own winter as well,
that I, too, have things to shed.”
Yes!
Thank you! I was reporting live lol
😆 Expertly done!
Arwen, you are a great poet! I enjoyed every words of this. I keep reading it over and over.
Beautiful, Arwen! That last stanza brings it home.
I believe he knows
I am ending my own winter as well,
that I, too, have things to shed.
You fascinate me! What a hypnotic poem.
“He has come to bear witness” – awesome! You have woven magic here.
This line sings “bless and release,/they say, and he’s here before breakfast –/light as a feather.”
Sweetness: “He, and I, and the pen/flying across my journal are the only/lively things ahead of the sun.”
Love the tie in to fur shedding and the wisdom in “I, too, have things to shed.”
My cat is shedding as I read your poem. Your verse and message are true from start to finish!