My Eden, II
Our old neighbors didn’t use
their deck. Shame they never knew
this Eden’s quirky gifts. Now
lemon and lime trees, curry
plant, Mother’s-Day mums line deck—
its heart a baby cooing
bubbles, blessing deck’s next year.
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I love this personification, “its heart a baby cooing…”
Love these Eden poems! Great details to set the scene! Also like the baby cooing.
Eden indeed. “its heart a baby cooing”!
Baby’s heart cooing. Very nice.
Excellent poem. Love “this Eden’s quirky gifts.”
my favorite line, too: its heart a baby cooing
I think I’d fit in well in your Eden. This is lovely.