My First Tree Peony
The first time
my tree peony bloomed,
the petals ballet pink,
an all ruffle tu-tu–
it was as big as a truck hub cap,
hanging from the side of an old farmer’s barn.
I honestly don’t know
that I will ever be that awestruck
again. I wanted to kneel down
before it, sing out:
Amen Amen Amen.
The second day
a horizon of flat clouds
spread a tablecloth
then, knocked over
a half full pitcher of water on it.
The third day
it drizzled all day long.
The fourth day
the rain marched
all over the boxwoods, the azaleas,
and the tree peony–who looked up
and said OK that’s enough!
So, next to that giant peony,
I rigged up a bright blue and white golfer’s umbrella,
tied it to a shepherd’s hook with an old braided clothes line.
Saved that first and only blossom from
drifting its petals like 1000 tearful tongues.
I swear I heard tree peony say
thank you thank you thank you,
broadcasting from its saffron yellow center.
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Lovelovelove this.
Thank you !
Great story!
Oh- you have captured the relationship among gardeners, rain and the precious peony so well. Such passion!
Beautiful!
Oh, my goodness! This poem has such tenderness! I love the speaker who puts an umbrella over her peony bloom. Love these lines:
Saved that first and only blossom from
drifting its petals like 1000 tearful tongues.
love this fresh voice
Oh my–what can I say–this is so elegantly beautiful with reverence and love of the flowers but peony tree especially. And I, like Ellen Austin-Li who referenced :
“I rigged up a bright blue and white golfer’s umbrella,
tied it to a shepherd’s hook with an old braided clothes line.
Saved that first and only blossom from
drifting its petals like 1000 tearful tongues.”
I feel strongly about that and loved this so much…so well done..said ..illustrated…communicated—the petals as tearful tongues—loved that. Thank you for this splendid poem!