Note to self, don’t forget to *
drown in
the power
of a
field,
a creek.
Latch
to want,
a
bird, blue
blur,
hovering
solitude.
* An erasure of Ada Limón’s poem “Drowning Creek” in her collection, The Hurting Kind
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Lovely!
BIG love!!
perfect title
Beautiful. I’ve loved reading your poems this year.
Thank you, Gwyneth. What a pleasure it’s been reading yours.
Fantastic. Thanks for your gifts this month.
The same to you, Kevin. I’ve so enjoyed reading the poems you’ve shared.
Love it — you have a great talent for this form. Have so enjoyed what you’ve offered.
Very nice, Karen. I especially like the way the dreamy ending makes me feel.
Well done!
I love this, Karen. As always, I enjoy getting the opportunity to read your writing and have appreciated your poems this month! Looking forward to more soon.
Wow
Brilliant, Karen! Captured by the movement you create.
Every part of this is intentional and effective. Wonderful piece.