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Lexington Poetry Month



You stand

toes curled

on the threshold

my heart

in your back pocket

6 responses to “Pocket”

  1. Joseph Nichols says:

    Love it!!

  2. Invokes the diving board image without water. Great stuff!

  3. Gaby Bedetti says:

    powerful in haiku-like concision and depth

  4. A. Taylor says:

    Love this. Perfect imagery to go with the feeling.

  5. K. Bruce Florence says:

    My exact reaction when my grandson came to my door.
    You did such a terrific job of finding all that emotion with so few words.

  6. mtpoet says:

    As simple as a Japanese form, but as comforting as true love.

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