Praise Poem While Weeding
Ode to one-yank weeds, the maple seedling
still winged at its roots,
the unmighty oak,
the violet in spring-wet dirt
above its bundle of tubers,
even the young dandelion, eager to please.
Sometimes it’s okay to be easy.
All those seasons of digging to the hard knot
of why I would never be we,
the taproot of loneliness buried in heavy clay.
And then came you, released
into my life as if you had been planted there.
Or was it me let loose of rocky soil?
Of course, marriage is not that simple.
Later, all those broken mattocks,
that wilderness of honeysuckle in our first backyard,
the rose mallow I planted that almost took over the garden.
But you and I once plucked, remain transplanted.
Your roots to mine.
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what a gorgeous metaphor. my favorite lines though – “sometimes it’s okay to be easy.” then – “and then came you, released into my life as if you had been planted there.” brought back cherished memories, thank you.
Beautiful!
Gorgeous. Especially loved the imagery of these lines:
“All those seasons of digging to the hard knot
of why I would never be we,
the taproot of loneliness buried in heavy clay.”
A lovely ode, Pauletta!
Love the garden metaphors
It really made me feel the entwining of roots beneath the ground and joining of 2.
Lovely and empathetic poem. The aside “Sometimes it’s okay to be easy.” really welcomes the reader into the piece as it gets closer into the private intimacy of a marriage
I love the language and images in this poem—and the humor “Sometimes it’s okay to be easy.”
Love this, Pauletta!
Love this ending
Fav lines
But you and I once plucked, remain transplanted.
Your roots to mine.
wonderful, love “ode to one-yank weeds”
Well, this one about did me in, Pauletta. Beautiful, and true, and hopeful. Thank you. Really touched me.